“Who are you?” Vertin frowned.
Start writing, focus on building the world, the tension between Vertin and authority, and the unfolding mystery. Use dialogue to develop characters. Show Vertin's skills through actions. Maybe include a time limit to add urgency. -ENG- Vertin in detention -RJ01250668-
He’d hacked the right system.
“Someone who got caught trying to delete their file from the Experiment Nexus. They gave me detention. You?” “Who are you
Twist: The school is testing students' problem-solving skills, and detention is part of an experiment. Or maybe the principal is an AI that's malfunctioning. Maybe Vertin's hacking was an attempt to find the truth, leading to detention as a form of control. focus on building the world